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Post by monkeykid on Aug 23, 2005 19:20:17 GMT -5
When a new deer, named Buck, has to sevre community sevice at Camp Kidney and he chosses to be an assitant at The Squirrel Scouts and falls for Jane Doe, evan though he hates kids and is mean to The Squirrel Scouts, he acts like an angel in front of Doe and flirts with her a lot and the worst part is she buying it. Then one day Lumpus goes over to the camp with flowers and candy for her and sees Buck, as Buck tells him she's not there at the moment. So Lumpus gives him the Flowers and candy to give to her but instead he passes them off as his own and Jane falls in love with him. When Lumpus hears this he is outraged and tries to tell Jane that those were his but she dosen't believe him, So he tries other attempts to impress her but Buck just screws it up and makes Lumpus look bad while he looks even better then ever. Lumpus becomes so depressed he dosen't even come out of his cabin and he makes the Bean scouts do more chores then they ever had to do before. Once Lazlo discovers the problem, Lazlo along with Clam, Raj, Patsy, Nina, and Gretchan decide to ruin there date and prove Buck for the forad he is.
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Post by esanchez7587 on Aug 23, 2005 19:30:10 GMT -5
Grade: A. I liked the story summary but when you send me the fanfic, it went passed a little on the cussing and the "pills". It would show on Adult Swim if it follows what you wrote. Still, I liked it.
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Post by monkeykid on Aug 23, 2005 19:58:15 GMT -5
Yeah but like I told you, that 's Buck, I can't imagine him any other way
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Post by crystalbandicoot on Aug 28, 2005 17:28:37 GMT -5
Cool! I like this idea.
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